- MemberNovember 2, 2020 at 9:29 pm
I agree with Rose, the setting you describe in your blurb is way more interesting to me than the art world in general. There must be some simple way to tip your hat to it without being long winded. Another thing that stood out to me from the blurb was your statement about The Collector (knowing what he wants, I think it said?) Any room to squeeze your villain into the hook as well?
Overall, I like that your hook is short as I imagine it would pitch well in an elevator. Good job, Robyn!
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