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    Chris Lowenstein

    October 27, 2020 at 11:33 pm

    Hi Darren,

    Thanks for taking the time to read and offer feedback. Looking at your suggestions, I agree that there are some extraneous words here. It’s definitely been a challenge for me to figure out how much detail is enough to hook a reader. Thanks for the suggestions as to what could be cut.