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    Jan Carr

    October 19, 2020 at 10:31 pm

    Thanks very much Kell. Really helpful – I think I’ve been too subtle! the Para that begins ‘mum says I don’t listen’ is meant to be the clue – Bert doesn’t want to hear what her Mum has to say so she escapes for another trip with Dad.