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    Rose Thompson

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    October 14, 2020 at 9:21 pm

    Hi Nicole

    I think the first is intriguing, but a bit too abstract for my taste. The second gives a better idea of what the idea is and I think ‘sells’ it better.

    Hope that is helpful.

    Rose

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