MemberOctober 6, 2020 at 10:04 am
Clashing feedback! It’s all good. Thanks for the response.
About the minutiae – one of the goals of this novel was to try pre-plot it and stick to the three act structure; all of the going to work stuff is the ‘ordinary world’ set up. Having said that, I’ll think about how to make this first section a bit more grabby; enough so that if a person was reading the first few pages with Amazon’s Look Inside, they’d be inspired to keep reading.