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    Joe Ruiz

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    October 4, 2020 at 5:02 pm

    I like.It pretty much tells me what to expect. The only word that break that flow for me are “magical inhabitants”. Feels like the preceding descriptions were very specific. Magical inhabitant quite general. Not a deal breaker. Still a good book hook.

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