MemberOctober 1, 2020 at 3:03 pm
Jac, that’s certainly intriguing, but I’m not sure what ‘Victorian London is frozen’ has to do with the rest. I get that you’re setting up the location and period, but are they vital to the plot in some way? Is there another way to include it? (Jack must scour the London frost-fair to… whatever).
Also did Jack do the burglary? It sounds like it, but then you say he has to find the real culprit.
I like the sound of the setting, and the plot – I look forward to learning more about it!