MemberSeptember 29, 2020 at 4:32 pm
IWRT based solely on the description of Barbara’s quest in the second to last paragraph. And if you can show young audiences string theory in a way that makes sense, then I’m all about it!
I like the idea of life not being like a story in one of her books – I’m new to writing so I won’t try to make editing suggestions other than to say my sense is that the blurb needs tightening and somehow its the places where you reference “life not like a story” that come across clumsy to me. I’m sorry I can’t elaborate on that, just giving you my first impression.
Look forward to reading all about Barbara’s quest!