Home › Forums › Book Hooks › Denise Ganley – Cadaver Dog Book Hook › Reply To: Denise Ganley – Cadaver Dog Book Hook Robyn SartyMember September 26, 2020 at 1:21 pmHey Denise,Really like this. But it’s a bit of a run-on sentence. I think if you chop it in half, you’ll have a much punchier hook.