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    Liz Green

    September 25, 2020 at 2:58 am


    I am FLOORED by the transformation from version one to version two. I liked version one and loved the idea of a repressed office worker being thrown into this magical, dangerous world. Then, when I came to version two… well it just sounds so pro! It sounds like a real book! Love it! But even more, I’m impressed with your ability to revise and come back stronger. This is inspiring!