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    Rose Thompson

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    September 24, 2020 at 4:52 pm

    Hi Sandra

    I agree with the others about there being too much information in your book hook. Maybe it would help to think about trying to keep it to two short(ish) sentences? And to drop almost all of the names and just focus on your young noble woman.

    I have found it helpful to try to keep mine to three short sentences.

    Rose 🙂

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