MemberSeptember 24, 2020 at 4:45 pm
I agree with Jan, I really like that first question, really draws you in. The second question is good too, although I don’t think you need the And at the beginning of the sentence.
I think you should focus on hooking people into this book, because that way new readers may go back for book one. If you focus on people who already read book one they’ll probably know if they like/ don’t like your stuff anyway, I think it helps to think about people who haven’t read your stuff before.
Hope that helps