MemberSeptember 23, 2020 at 4:38 am
This is good as it tells me what the book’s about and is really clear. On the other hand, the hook doesn’t sing yet; if I was a busy executive in an elevator, and you told me this, it doesn’t sizzle or grab my attention. Not sure how to tweak it, but I think the book hook has to be a bit like a pop song, a bit catchy while also revealing the topic the book. Would love to see how this comes out.