- MemberSeptember 22, 2020 at 4:50 am
Love the ideas here, although I had to read the first paragraph twice to make sure I understood all the details, like character names. The blurb has better “flow” in the second and third paragraphs. That’s where I was drawn in to want to read more. I would read this book. I can’t wait to see how you develop the bookseller character as well!
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