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    Jac Harmon

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    September 21, 2020 at 10:18 am

    Hi Rose,

    I would definitely read this. Just the idea of a vintage dress with its own spirit was enough for me.

    As Liz says I think splitting the blurb so it reflects the dual narrative is a good idea. Otherwise I don’t think I can add much to the great advice already given.

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