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    Rose Thompson

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    September 21, 2020 at 6:55 am

    Hi Liz

    Thank you for the feedback, it’s so helpful.

    The ‘feeding’ is literally about feeding. She’s starving for the kind of energy she needs and uses Julianne as a way of getting it. I think.

    Yes I should try to split the blurb as you suggest, it’s on my list!

    Thanks again for your comments 🙂

    Rose

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