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    Mark Hood

    September 19, 2020 at 1:13 pm

    I really like this one! I can’t tell from the hook who Barbara is, as others have said, but it’s quite clear she’s young.

    The tone is also hard to pick up – it starts out light and happy, ribbons and all, then it’s wars and (presumably) death. Perhaps that’s deliberate, or maybe I’m overthinking it.

    But I’d definitely pick it up if I saw it on a bookshelf!