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    Brian Liew [YA-SF-GrimDark]

    September 16, 2020 at 9:00 am

    Hi Darren,

    If Walter Hall was to tell us exactly the same information that the blurb does in his Narrator voice, how would that look?

    Walter Hall sounds like a university dormitory, just saying – it’s only the 3rd line in your current blurb that removes the ambiguity.


    Thanks about ‘click elsewhere to close the window’ tip (in your reply in my thread)


    Do the basic initial formatting, like you did.

    Click on Aa – there’s basic Bold and Italic there,

    For the boxes (and the Courier font), click on the </>

    To make the blocks distinct hit RETURN.

    I can’t work out how to re-join the blocks so get the basic formatting done first, otherwise you will be forced to cry and start again.