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    Mark Hood

    September 12, 2020 at 1:45 pm

    Thanks Denise, I appreciate the advice.

    The setting does need to be spelled out more, and yes, the pronoun is unclear – I think I struggle with shorter pieces like this blurb more than I do with the book itself!