- MemberSeptember 11, 2020 at 9:52 pm
Thanks for such thoughtful feedback!
You were spot on when you said it was weird to start talking about the president fighting, then jump to the husband. The conflict is really with the husband, not the president, but the husband is following the president’s policies. I felt myself getting a bit tangled when I wrote this! I like your suggestions, though. Really helpful. Thanks!
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