- MemberSeptember 11, 2020 at 10:02 am
I’d say this is pretty much spot on for a nice intriguing logline! Would definitely encourage me to ask/read more.
Where does she live now? Is it outside Ireland? If so, would she consider it going back to Ireland or the West of Ireland when she returns? Asking just because you want it to be as snappy as possible, and dropping West of could help there.
Tiny bit of nitpicking, but you could also reposition the placement of Ireland so that we meet Eve sooner, as it’s her story.
The murder of her childhood friend sends Eve scrambling back to Ireland to protect an old secret and find a killer – before she meets the same fate.
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