- MemberSeptember 11, 2020 at 9:08 am
I think that’s great!
I like ‘scrambling’ too (- use it a lot!) but what does it mean here? Is Eve returning to The west of Ireland or is she already there?
So much to unpack which is brilliant for your story.
Just re-read and Eve is returning! Scrambling suggest desperation to me – is Eve going to be your detective?
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