- MemberSeptember 10, 2020 at 4:08 pm
Thanks Sandra. Actually, her uncle turns out to be a bit of a cad, she just doesn’t know it when she rescues him.
Interesting point re: the sarcastic ego combo. I’ve dropped that from later versions – I had tried to combine Barbara’s pessimistic, sarcastic, and somewhat selfish outlook on life into a snappy phrase but perhaps it did not come across as such.
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