- MemberSeptember 10, 2020 at 4:33 am
Hey, Nicole…love your story idea (hope I can be a “Beta Reader” sometime soon.) I’m curious about the mosaic stones…are they crystals that communicate by sound or psychically ? Maybe I watch too many Ancient Aliens episodes 😉 You do say knowledge is “etched” upon them, so the Vehrka do have a written language? I too, found the hunting ground description a little distracting (I mean, if it’s eternal winter, how then is there summer hunting grounds and winter refuge) would it be sufficient to just tell us that the eternal winter is coming to an end…as your intro?
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