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    Sadye Paez

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    September 8, 2020 at 8:57 pm

    Hi Denise! I agree with Kell that I think it could be clearer how Jules know that Mr Nelson was murdered. I also think the ‘Nevermind’ line may not be necessary. I like the concept of having a team to get it done and the delusions of Murder She Wrote-like grandeur. Robyn’s notes on sections that could be tighten are also great. I just learned the term ‘cosy mystery’ so I do not have much to compare it to, but IWRT! It sounds like a great holiday book!

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