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    Robyn Sarty

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    September 8, 2020 at 7:44 pm

    Wow! I can feel your imagination pouring through in this blurb! The problem is…I’m also confused. I can tell the story is going to be great, you’ve got so many elements there. But the blurb doesn’t need to tell them all. Pull back a bit. I think Denise has given you an excellent restructure.

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