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    Nicole Muchowski

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    September 8, 2020 at 5:26 pm

    Thank you, Denise.

    Yes, I have not clearly identified the main conflict. The war-hungry tribe is a minor player (but maybe should play a bigger role?). I don’t want the premise to be “knowledge is power”, but I keep drifting that way…

    Using “Save the Cat” story structure, in Act 2, Fun + Games “This is the heart of the story”, my protagonist is leading a splinter tribe to an unknown refuge as foretold by the stones.

    I will have to spend some time in the “heart of my story”, I think.

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