- MemberSeptember 7, 2020 at 4:08 am
Hey Adam — sounds wild — like Hitch Hikers guide meets Alice in Wonderland? Like some of the others that have commented, I dig the genre and a precocious girl with baby carrots saving the say lol:)
Was a little confused what the invention is and how it relates to the multiverse…? Is it a portal through which she travels, or do things from the multiverse come into our world? Needs clarity. And listing all these things that the non-story isn’t, seems like a waste of space. You only have so many words to hook me, so I think you should tell us what the story IS. What is the promise of the book/your premise. More of what you have with the second half of the blurb.
But, again, love this genre.
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