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    Adam Jarvis

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    September 5, 2020 at 2:20 am

    Tough choice. That’s a hell of a lot of work. I’d say – rewrite one or two scenes in first person, then compare that rewrite with the original by reading both out loud. Whichever feels more natural and flows better, go with that.

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