- MemberNovember 2, 2020 at 9:01 pm
I’m drawn to the idea of the past invading the present, but I’m also drawn to the succinct nature of your third hook. Could you perhaps alter it a bit?
“When the nightmares of the sixteenth century crawl into your comprehensive school in the 1990s, what do you do? Oliver Scott, a lad rejected by society, must figure out the answer, before everything is torn apart.”
However you land it, this sounds like a story I would enjoy reading.
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