- MemberOctober 28, 2020 at 7:15 am
Thanks for this too, just seen it. It is a funny one about length vs detail, which I’ve seen a few people toying with. I agree with the detail aspect but like you say it also needs to act as a hook. It got me thinking whether the first line needs to be the killer so they’re prepared to listen to/read another couple of sentences, if it’s a bit longer. Anyway, I agree that maybe taking a couple of elements out of 2 or 3 of these and combining the best bits is the answer. I do really like the way you’ve put them together so might work with that. Thank you!
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