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    Barb Reimer

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    October 20, 2020 at 4:27 pm

    Adam, thanks for your thoughts. I see the importance of Paula’s age and need for the aunt’s first name – it’s Alice, at least right now. i have focus don what she has to gain from all this, but not on what she has to lose, although on first blush I think it is the comfort and ease of her current life. Need to do some noodling on this. Appreciate your time.

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