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    Jan Carr

    October 19, 2020 at 10:40 pm

    Thanks Darren, I think you’re right about last para – From the cover/ blurb the reader would know she’s a girl/identifies as a girl. Plus there’s a lot of ‘addressing the reader’ and agents 9 though i’m not looking for one) don’t tend to like that.