MemberOctober 15, 2020 at 5:46 pm
I think Adam explained my dilemma better than I did!
Perhaps when a reader is looking at your sales page with the cover and title right in front of them, and the title italicized in the blurb, it would tie in better, but as it reads right now, it’s just a name in the middle of the blurb.
As for which one to change, that’s up to you! If your heart is set on Zach as the title, then just tweaking the blurb will help. Or maybe your title will be “Zach: A Memoir”?