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    Denise Ganley

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    October 15, 2020 at 6:57 am

    Thanks, Jan. I’ll look at all of that backstory and lack of dialogue when I get around to edits. I’m about 20k words into the first draft and still figuring out where I’m going. I think the very next paragraph told how he died, actually. So a little delayed. lol.

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