- MemberOctober 15, 2020 at 1:16 am
Thanks for reading and offering all of the feedback, Darren. Even pernickety comments are welcome here.
A few comments on your lists.
1. This is a good point. They pretty much do die, but certain cells keep growing/multiplying. I’m going to have to think about how I word that part exactly.
2. Your confusion here makes total sense. I didn’t set the scene well enough.
3. Went back and forth on including this, so good to know.
4. Agree this is worded weirdly. Thomas has not had this done to him literally, but Heather and Oweld might. I’ll rework this part.
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