MemberOctober 15, 2020 at 1:05 am
“Are they contacted by Samuel L. Jackson wearing an eye patch???” I knew the story was missing something.
Wholeheartedly appreciate the thoughtful feedback, Adam. I did rewrite that bit about Thomas a lot, and it was probably in part because I was putting too much in there.
Thanks again for all of this. I’ll be stewing over it in my current edits and rewrites of the story too.