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MemberOctober 14, 2020 at 1:40 pm
Thanks so much for reading and giving feedback, Robyn. I agree that there’s some clunkiness and even repetitiveness in the way I wrote the blurb. I’m working on a revision. I am happy with my premise for the story, but I think I can express it better in a future draft. I appreciate your thoughts.