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    Julie Jacobsen

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    October 12, 2020 at 11:59 am

    Thank you Robyn! So the title refers to something that happens about 2/3 of the way through my journey, which means the reader will have to hang in there before it makes sense. That’s one reason I call it a working title because I’m not sure it will stay. It also directly ties to that quote I put at the start of the blurb about the one who remembers (that’s the meaning of the name Zach). So just to clarify, your opinion is that the title is confusing and that it should connect more clearly with the blurb? In your opinion, what would you change, the title or the blurb?

    Thanks again.

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