- MemberOctober 6, 2020 at 6:31 pm
Nice job, Denise. Just a couple things:
Maybe you could add the dog’s name?
Is/was Julep a cop? If not, what does she do for a living that may help her in solving crimes (other than her new canine BFF)?
Your hook definitely has a humorous tone to it, which makes me very interested in reading it.
And it gives a glimpse of similar situations in the future (can’t keep a good dog down, lol)
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