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    Liz Green

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    October 5, 2020 at 8:59 pm

    Hi! Your logline (or whatever it’s called) is AMAZING! Really, really fun. Sold!

    The bigger book hook had me a little confused. Is the focus on the girl and her journey to become a doctor? Or on the girl gang? Or the Nazi plot? Of course, I know a book can be about all these things, but for the sake of the book hook, wrangling them all in there left me a bit confused about what to expect from the story.

    The first sentence gave me the feel of a coming-of-age story about discovering what you really want from life. The bit about the girl gang made me feel like it was a Hardy Boys (girls!) type adventure. The Nazi bit made me think of an action thriller.

    Whatever it is, it sounds fun and exciting and intriguing! And I can’t wait to hear more.

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