Thank you, Barb. It’s funny, I wrote the blurb before getting into the story, and Mac sounded so beefy and no BS, but he’s been Declan throughout my draft writing so far 🙂
I guess this is the point of having a blurb before starting the meat of the project, because, yes, I need to amp up the game, and the damage has to be specific and have consequences for my MC. These details are manifesting as I write.
You’re right, though, more specific punch, and I have a detail or two that I’m keeping too close to the vest.
