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    Jac Harmon

    October 1, 2020 at 6:32 pm

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    Nothing’s going Jack’s way. Taking on a house breaking job for gang boss Septimus Brand seems like a good way to make money until the loot goes missing between drop off and pick up and he gets the blame. Jack suspects a set-up, but Brand wants him dead. There’s only one way to stay alive and that’s to find the real culprit.

    I’m consciously trying to keep it short but it feels a bit bland. Is it enough? Help?