MemberSeptember 29, 2020 at 11:49 am
I really like your hook and would read just from this. But I went back to look at your blurb and the setting is so interesting, and kind of not ‘the art world’ that I was wandering if there is a way to hint at that? I think at the moment your hook reads a bit like it is set in the glamorous setting of art galleries and museums, when your setting is more interesting than that.
That’s my main thought anyway!