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    Robyn Sarty

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    September 29, 2020 at 11:29 am

    Hey Darren, hmm, interesting point. I understand why you say that and it’s not a bad idea. I’m just worried it would make it too long. I personally get lost when a hook has too many factors in it. And I wonder if suddenly added “secrets” in would confuse the reader? I’ll definitely poke at it and see if I can make it fit though. Thanks!

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