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    Laura Regan

    September 28, 2020 at 8:05 am

    Hey Melissa,


    Really like your blurb and your story sounds like my go-to kind of book.

    I think it gives a good introduction to the main character and the set up. If I read the first three paragraphs on the back of a book I would definitely pick it up.

    I do feel like the last line is overly complicated though. (‘One in which she will do whatever she can to get out of there alive.’) It could be snappier, I had to read it a couple of times to untangle it.

    But I’m excited to hear more about your book, it’s nice to find someone writing in a similar genre to myself 🙂