MemberSeptember 23, 2020 at 4:34 am
Hey Mark! I’m finding it a little bit vague – what is inhuman about Richard? What is he struggling with? This is a classic ticket for a story about exploring one’s identity, which I always love, but I’m not sure what Richard is exploring here (is he a robot? a vampire? an amnesiac?) or what this has to do with his mentor.
Hope this helps!