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    Jan Carr

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    September 22, 2020 at 6:56 am

    That’s great Jac!

    Just clarity on two nit picky things, which I can work out fairly quickly but for the blurb I’d like to be instantly obvious.

    What’s a ‘Flash’ house

    Flo’s relationship/ importance to Jack

    I love the last sentence – maybe becauseI know what a stove pipe hat looks like but its a great and very hooky image to end on.

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