MemberSeptember 22, 2020 at 6:56 am
That’s great Jac!
Just clarity on two nit picky things, which I can work out fairly quickly but for the blurb I’d like to be instantly obvious.
What’s a ‘Flash’ house
Flo’s relationship/ importance to Jack
I love the last sentence – maybe becauseI know what a stove pipe hat looks like but its a great and very hooky image to end on.