MemberSeptember 21, 2020 at 11:41 am
I really like the snow storm setting, and find the set up very intriguing. I would read this.
I think it would be helpful to explain who Flo is a little more. I’m assuming she’s a madam, but what is her relationship to Jack?
I’m also not sure about the description of the man in the stove pipe hat.
I look forward to reading more.