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    Rose Thompson

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    September 21, 2020 at 11:41 am

    Hi Jac

    I really like the snow storm setting, and find the set up very intriguing. I would read this.

    I think it would be helpful to explain who Flo is a little more. I’m assuming she’s a madam, but what is her relationship to Jack?

    I’m also not sure about the description of the man in the stove pipe hat.

    I look forward to reading more.

    🙂

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