Home › Forums › Blurbs › Beta Blurb: Feeding Jasmine Valentine › Reply To: Beta Blurb: Feeding Jasmine Valentine Liz Green Member September 21, 2020 at 5:03 am Oh, I just read the comments. I didn’t realize it was a dual narrative. I wonder if you could try splitting the blurb into three. Julianna is … Daisy is … They must … before [bad thing]. ?