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    Liz Green

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    September 21, 2020 at 5:03 am

    Oh, I just read the comments. I didn’t realize it was a dual narrative. I wonder if you could try splitting the blurb into three.

    Julianna is …

    Daisy is …

    They must … before [bad thing].

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