Oh, I just read the comments. I didn’t realize it was a dual narrative. I wonder if you could try splitting the blurb into three.
Julianna is …
Daisy is …
They must … before [bad thing].
?
Oh, I just read the comments. I didn’t realize it was a dual narrative. I wonder if you could try splitting the blurb into three.
Julianna is …
Daisy is …
They must … before [bad thing].
?